Monday, November 3, 2025

Ardan Physiology

Important Note: The bulk of this has either been written into continuity with the publication of Book I, back in 2017, or it can be found in the subsequent (unreleased) books. Either way, I’ve since had the information sent off and looked at with a couple of changes made here and there for the sake of realism. While I might write Science Fantasy, I love the idea of adding realism into my story, and if that realism can be double-checked for the sake of consistency, then I’m all the more satisfied. 

Also note: Obviously, some stuff (like the reality warping ability) can be relegated to storyteller fiat, but the rest of it, though odd, is relatively sound. 


Ardan Physiology 


Introduction:
Overview: The Ardans are a humanoid race from the planet Ardis in the Dorastis System. Outwardly, they resemble humans with comparable genotypes and phenotypes. However, internally, several differences separate them from humans. 

Gestation: Ten Months

Lifespan: 225 years. Due to a genetic differential found within 10% of the population, this number increases from 250 to over 975+ years of age. 

External Differences:
Hair & Fingernails: Ardan body hair is highly similar to vellum hair, closer to the skin, and notably finer in appearance, with terminal hair concentrated on the face, scalp, underarms, and groin. Ardan's hair grows at half the rate of human hair, with fingernails growing at a similar pace. 

Eye, Skin, and Hair Color: While these traits share similarities with those found in humans, there are subtle differences regarding gene expression. Blue, Green, and Gray tend to be more common, with greater expression in the variety of shades and hues. Though brown and dark brown eyes are present, they tend to be concentrated near the equatorial regions of the planet. In other geographical regions, there are varieties of amber, hazel, and honey. 

Hair Color: Hair colors and varieties tend to be comparable to those of humans, with some differences. Auburn, blonde, and red tend to be more common, with a greater variety of shades. Brown and Black are present, with brown tending toward lighter shades, and black hair localized to various geographic locations where solar energy is most abundant or direct. 

Skin Color: Though their skin color is comparable to that of humans, its range is slightly narrower, from exceptionally light to a medium brown, and every possible shade in between. This is due primarily to Ardis’s distance from its parent star. Being a little further away, it has 8% dimmer midday light than Earth. 

Internal:
Overview
The Ardans are a species native to the planet Ardis, a world comparable to Earth. Their species arose upon their homeworld 1.15 million years ago from the present, interbreeding out and outcompeting their archaic contemporaries to become the dominant species on the planet. Possessing substantially higher tolerances to lower temperatures and radiation than humans, their internal physiology is comparable, though it varies somewhat. 

The Ardans are a species native to Ardis, a world comparable to Earth. The first Anatomically Modern Ardans appeared on the scene 1.15 million years ago, interbreeding or outcompeting with their archaic contemporaries, to become the dominant race on the planet. Possessing a higher tolerance to lower temperatures than humans, their internal physiology is significantly more refined than that found in humans. This aside, there are notable key differences. 

Genetics:
Ardan DNA is a tightly coiled quadruplex (quadruple-helix) with a right-winding zigzag pattern, repeating every other base pair with little difference in width. The karyotype consists of seventy-six chromosomes arranged into nineteen homologous tetrads. With harmful mutations and other degraded genetic material edited out and deleted, the final tetrad fuses into pairs, giving rise to two genders. On average, the Ardan X Chromosome has over 1800 genes, while the Ardan Y Chromosome has 1790. 

All Ardans have antifreeze and radioprotective proteins, making them extremely tolerant and heavily resistant to the deleterious effects of low temperatures and radiation. 

After the loss of their psychic abilities, a significant change within their genetic structure occurred half a million years ago, resulting in a combination of psychological and physiological changes. It’s believed this process was sparked through the nascent Ardan Metaconsciousness, which connected the species on an instinctual level. When physically mapped, this shielding appears as an extremely intricate series of complexly dynamic interlocking fields that interactively alter and adapt in strength and patterning in response to the environment around them in literal moments. Their incredibly resilient nature makes them a considerably daunting challenge for all but the most powerful reality alterers who can pierce them effortlessly. 

 Their intrinsic presence makes them heavily resistant or outright immune to mental domination, possession, conditioning, empathic, telepathic, and telempathic intrusion, although surface thoughts and emotions may be sensed by those with the capabilities to do so. With the proper training and discipline, it’s possible to prevent even this from being discerned. Physiologically, they are similarly resistant to Hallucinogens, Barbiturates, most Depressants and Stimulants, and other psychoactive drugs that can negatively affect their perception, mood, consciousness, cognition, or behavior.

Roughly five percent of the population still bear a remnant of that past, reduced to extrasensory perception. Limited in scope, these abilities are as follows: Clairvoyance, Precognition, Psychometry, Retrocognition, and a specialized form of Bio-Energy Perception remarkably similar to Aura Perception.

Circulatory System
Ardan red blood cells contain a higher hemoglobin concentration—370 million hemoglobin biomolecules—than what is found in human red blood cells: 270 million. Notably darker and thicker, it is three times more efficient at absorbing, transporting, and reverse binding oxygen than human red blood cells. With slightly less oxygen in their homeworld—19.7% as opposed to 20.95% on Earth—they respire without issue. 

The pulmonary system evolved into a pair of four-chambered hearts working in tandem to channel blood thoroughly throughout the body. They are somewhat more muscular, flexible, and considerably more resilient than the human heart. Though the right is primary in most Ardans, it is not uncommon to find the left primary, and in exceedingly rare circumstances, neither one is primary, both beating in perfect tandem. None of these variations leads to complications. Regardless, the primary heart tends to be followed anywhere from one to three seconds afterward, with both working to remove carbon dioxide and other waste products, meanwhile oxygenating the tissues at a substantially high rate. 

Respiratory System:
Due to the presence of a duo-cardiovascular system, Ardan lungs are slightly smaller, but tetra-lobed, giving them a volumetric area 1.75 times greater than what’s found in human lungs. Highly developed and considerably refined, their alveoli are two and a half times more efficient at taking in, absorbing, and processing oxygen. The only other difference lies in the regenerative ability of the pulmonary alveolus; their lungs completely regenerate at five times the rate of human lungs. 

Immune System:
The Ardan immune system is considerably more aggressive, refined, resilient, and adaptable in comparison to the human immune system. Whereas Humans have an innate, general defense and adaptive immunity, Ardan biology adds to this by including what has been labeled as reactive and mutable. If the innate and general defense systems are unable to deal with the foreign antigen, reactive immunity is triggered. Known as J, P, and Q-Cells, these cytotoxic antibodies are equipped with a varied array of defenses designed to aggressively attack any harmful pathogens present in the body. Once a response has been made, mutable immunity is triggered, which is an advanced combination of the first four, learning almost instantly from any encounter, shaping, and altering responses to any foreign antigen, and is impossible to deceive. The only difference between the Human and Ardan adaptive immunity is that Ardan B and T cells are more aggressive and seemingly quasi-intelligent, learning from any encounter and genetically encoding all experiences for lifelong use as a biological multi-referential database. 

Under exceptional circumstances, Ardans rarely fall under any serious illness. Those foreign antigens that they come into contact with and interact with can trigger an initial response in a matter of minutes. Their bodies can withstand decades or more of punishment and hard living, hardily resisting even the most tenacious disease, even up to their moment of death. Due to the invariably refined nature of their immune system, autoimmune diseases, while theorized, are non-existent among their species. As a secondary effect of this, they do have a reasonable tolerance to poisons as their bodies process them like any other pathogen. However, they are not immune, with potent enough concentrations overwhelming their systems, incapacitating, or possibly killing them. 

Integumentary System
The Ardan Integumentary System is relatively like that found in humans. The only true difference is an extra skin layer called the mesodermis found between the epidermis and dermis. This layer plays a role in heat regulation, as well as fat-to-energy conversion. 

Lymphoid System:
The Lymphoid System within Ardans is relatively comparable to the one found in the human body. The only major differences lie between the primary and secondary lymphoid organs, which are three times more refined than the Human lymphoid system. Secondly, the lymph nodes and lymphatics show greater development, with the lymphatic vessels carrying their fluid bidirectional toward the hearts. The only other differences lie in that the system is roughly streamlined to improve efficiency and produce near-instant responses when harmful things invade the body. 

Musculoskeletal System
Due to greater oxygenation from their circulatory system, Ardans developed stronger muscles, a higher level of endurance, and greater potential function with regard to flight and fight response. Their bodies show greater efficiency than humans at removing lactic acid during stress-related activities such as load-bearing and endurance-related activities. They are twice as resilient when it comes to withstanding physical injuries, such as pulled or torn muscles or ligaments, sprains, and broken bones. Ardan bone is ~1.6–1.8x denser than human bone in load-bearing regions (spine, femur, skull), with compact bone 2.0x denser in the cranial vault.”

Nervous System:
The Ardan nervous system is structured similarly to the human nervous system in that it has three major components: enteric, peripheral, and central. The enteric and peripheral systems are highly refined and structured, allowing for significantly greater sensory input, transmission, and interpretation by the central nervous system. The central nervous system shows the greatest differences. Their spinal cord is a tightly threaded bundle of interconnected tissues that receive, interpret, and transmit signals throughout the body, two and a half times faster than the human spinal cord. 

Their brain is also structured differently. Facilitating interhemispheric communication, the corpus callosum consists of 315-330 million contralateral axonal projections compared to 200-250 million in humans. Volumetrically, the Ardan brain averages 1400 cm3 while the human brain averages 1250 cm3. Furthermore, the concentration of neurons in the Ardan brain lies between 150-175 billion, while in Humans, that number lies around 80-120 billion. Though their neocortex is considerably developed—the Ardan brain being twice as dense and more convoluted than the human brain—the highest development is found in all areas responsible for cognition and memory. 

This has resulted in a highly prodigious and ordered intellect with high potential for either eidetic or photographic memory, or even both. This has also led to the development of ancestral memory, accessible only through deep meditation or those capable of peering into another’s thoughts and seeing them. It has also led to the development of a significantly higher degree of spatial coordination than what is found in humans and much more refined senses. Lastly, while all of their senses except for sight are on par with Humans, they tend to be somewhat more vivid; sounds are clearer, tastes more defined, smells sharper, and touch better felt. 

Visual System: Evolving into a world a little further away than Earth, their daytime is 9.5% dimmer. Ardan physiology, therefore, developed to compensate in four ways. The first compensation was a considerable refinement to the occipital lobe. It can take, process, and interpret external stimuli two and a half times faster than the human brain at any given moment. The second refinement lies within the retina, which contains one-third more rods and cones than the human eye, is more densely compact, and has a blind spot half the size of the one found in the human eye. 

The third refinement lies in their ability to see in four wavelengths. With Dorastis being slightly bluer than Sol, Ardans have a UV-A Cone, allowing them to see in four wavelengths, their vision extending into the near-ultraviolet, with the potential to discern over a hundred million colors. The final refinement lies in their visual acuity, with even the average Ardan possessing 20/10 vision. 

All of this gave rise indirectly to a few other things. Although they do not have a tapetum lucidum, as found in cats and dogs, Ardans have remarkably sharp night vision, able to distinguish silhouettes, general appearances, and patterns, and discreet movements at twice the distance as humans in a quarter of less light. Their visuospatial ability is near precise, able to recall even the most minute details with frighteningly vivid detail, even after a century or more of having seen the image. 

Magnetoception: Ardans possess the ability to sense magnetic fields, ranging from local and regional proximity and orientation to the global field surrounding the planet. Depending on their sensitivity, Ardans can discern altitude, direction, strength, proximity, and orientation with near-perfect accuracy. If lost, whether in a city, desert, or wilderness, they can orient themselves using the global magnetic field to find their way back to their destination. With enough time, they can internalize their surroundings by generating a mental map of the magnetic variances around them and can retain that memory, even altering it as needed throughout their lifetime. 

Psychic Shields, ESP, and the Iadalen:
As a tradeoff to this development, Ardans mostly lost whatever psychic abilities they would have had had their race not been altered. However, they did retain some of it in other ways. Due greatly to a higher-ordered brain, a large part of this involved temporal awareness and knowledge of spatial-temporal direction and flow. The other lay in the form of sporadic developments of extrasensory perception. Though the traits are purely recessive and may not even show up for up to several generations, limited to geographic location, they have been documented. Limited in scope, these abilities are as follows: Clairvoyance, Precognition, Psychometry, Retrocognition, and a specialized form of Bio-Energy Perception remarkably similar to Aura Perception.

Out of all of this, it is the Iadalen, the ability to alter reality through will, that has changed the course of Ardan development. Its very nature is seemingly what altered the race as a whole from becoming a purely psionic one. Encompassing even psychically related abilities, the Iadalen endows the subject with the power to alter reality around them, though the extent of this is limited by the potency of the individual in question. While the least among them could alter the equivalent of a large humanoid, the most powerful among them, veritable ‘world-destroyers’, are exceptionally rare, regarded as near-legendary, and are seemingly as far above their own people as their own people are above insects. 


Saturday, December 30, 2023

Going Forward into the New Year

 A few things going forward into the New Year:

 The Edited & Revised version of Book I, ‘Chronicles of Ardis: Concordance,’ along with Books II (Reckonings,) III (Convergence,) & IV (Dark Winter,) were submitted to the editor of Battlefield Press in March. Aside from a conversation revision in Book IV and a few possible name changes in Book I, I’m satisfied with what’s been written. Hopefully, even more importantly, the readers will be too!

 Once the Crowdsource Campaign begins, I’ll share it in every place possible/permissible, dotting my I’s and crossing my T’s to make sure it’s successful. Accordingly, I have a write-up on Ardan Physiology that’s 85-90% finished that I’ll post here after the books have been officially published.

 Book V’s subtitle will be called Counterpoint. The book will take place 1-2 years after the events of Book IV. I had considered a more linear progression, having things occur through the Ardan year, but felt a time jump would work better. I’ll be taking my time establishing characters, placenames, etc… and possibly be done with the draft by the year’s end.

 Beyond this, I’ve little else to work on. Going forward I’ve some strong ideas for Book VI and one or two for Book VII, I think Book VII will be fun, and IX, X, and XI will probably be fun to write, with the endgame in mind for the last book. Even though I’ve told people I’m going for 11 books, truthfully if I’m sane enough I’d love to do much, much more for this series. 

Sunday, March 26, 2023

Revisiting the Map of the Planet

 As I was writing Book I between 2013-2015, I happened upon a planetary map generator that by serendipity gave me the configuration I wanted. Unfortunately, I didn’t know how to properly configure it, leaving me with a few inconsistencies, best cleared up by narration. Thankfully, I also have both a Mercator and a rotating version, allowing me to snag shots of locations of interest.

For a bit of explanation, the continents are Teladrin, Shadrelin, & Degna. Gaudna is a combination of two Subcontinents, Alden-Gaudna and Derren-Gaudna. Tifaeanyd (classified on the Mercator map as a protectorate) is part of the Sinseran Empire. Geologically, Shadrelin is rifting away from Teladrin,  Degna is moving southward, and Gaudna northward. Much of this, is in Book I, which was published back in 2017. 











Sunday, March 19, 2023

Stellar System & Moon Update; Months of the Year

 Whether this is the last time I do this, I can’t confirm. However, I am far more satisfied with the changes below. Adjustments were done using a slightly modified G5V star, with the following parameters: Mass: 0.98, Radius: 0.989, Luminosity: .90, Temperature: 5,660K. From what I could determine with an online calculator, its lifespan is roughly 10.518 billion years.

 Finding a Planet Habitability Calculator, the next two images show Ardis, followed by Liadrel's location within their star’s habitable zone. Interestingly enough, when Liadrel was plotted, it fits comfortably within the Optimistic Habitable Zone, meaning there is potential for habitability, albeit not humanoid life. I’d already conceived of something akin to life adapted to deserts, possibly discovered in a much later book, of course…

 As referenced by the original novel, Ardis was orbited by two moons. However, I had an orbital resonance issue and felt it could be resolved with the addition of a final natural satellite. The reason behind this stemmed from the nature of Io’s vulcanism as Nersis too is a volcanic moon. Jupiter's immense gravity tugs on and flexes the satellite. And though this plays a significant role, it isn’t the only factor. The other factor is that there is a 1:2:4 Laplace resonance between Ganymede, Europa, and Io. As Jupiter tugs, they too exert their gravitational influence, making Io unable to settle in its orbit causing tidal heating and friction, resulting in the geologic activity we see today. So too is Nersis in an identical resonance orbit with its sister moons. Also, the viewing angles are odd, mainly because Nersis and Kesis seem to be in the middle.

 The last image is the months of the year. Originally, there were 14, but I had an issue concerning Total Solar Intensity. While Ardis was well within Dorastis’s Habitable Zone, I judged the light reaching it too dim, 83%, versus the revision of 91.92%. There’s also the fact that Dorastis is 10% dimmer than Sol (our sun.) To solve my problem, I changed its orbital period from 420 to 393 days, dropping its calendar year to 13 months. Ardis is cooler than Earth. The last time I ran the numbers it was: 48F (8.89C) vs. 59F(15C).

All values found are as accurate as I could make them. If there’s something incorrect, please let me know, WITH works cited.  


                                                            





Thursday, February 2, 2023

They’re Done and Sent

Back in September I finished my modified-rough draft of Book IV and sent a request for resubmission for two reasons. First, and most obvious was that I wanted to include Book IV in with the other three. Second, since the last submission I had found multiple errors and mistakes littering what I had sent in, and this to me was unforgivable. I knew I couldn’t account for and correct every single error in the document, but I could reduce their frequency.

 My publisher replied back with ‘resubmit at my leisure.’  

 Putting aside Book IV, I went through the revised version of Book I (originally published around 2017), Book II, & Book III combing through them for any issues, cleaning up as much dialogue and grammatical mistakes as I could find, and expanding narration in places that needed it. This was especially the case for Book I, which was originally written with word 2007; a combination of the latest Word Software + Grammarly (which isn’t perfect, but it helps), allowed me to clean up over 2,500 issues, errors, and mistakes since its first publication.

 Book III had a chapter deleted because I decided it needed 21, instead of 18 chapters a couple of months ago. The last four chapters were too densely packed, and I was dissatisfied with the ending. Unfortunately, I did this with sleep deprivation creeping up and chapters 19&20 were identical. Before sending it off, I had this hunch that something was wrong, looked back, and was correct in my assumptions.

 Book IV had already received a similar treatment as I edited the work while I was writing it. It was just a matter of going through it with the same tools again and then cleaning up dialogue and narration where I found an issue.  

 Placing everything into a single document, from the first title page to the last cover blurb gave me 621 pages and 366,040 words. What comes next with them is of course… wait. They’re sent off, with nothing more to add or take away. Unless there’s some kind of issue that truly calls my attention from the publisher, I’m not touching them. What will likely take place is that they’ll be looked over, page formatted, finalized, and a Crowdsourced Campaign will take place.

 I’ve no plans to begin Book V until late Summer/early Fall, which will be subtitled: Counterpoint.

 The only other thing for me to do is to update the outdated Stellar System data further down the blog, along with several other things that likely need a good update. And as things move closer to publication, drop the cover blurbs. But… there you go! 

Monday, December 5, 2022

Chronicles of Ardis: Where Things Stand...

 It’s been well over a since I updated this blog. I’d been busy since then, either editing my previous unpublished works or in draft mode. So, below is the update for everything as follows…
 
Chronicles of Ardis: Concordance
First published back in 2017, it was written with Word 2007, and littered with grammatical mistakes which I attempted to rectify. Through a combination of the latest version of MS Word + Grammarly, I corrected roughly 2,000 or more mistakes, ranging from word choice errors to dialogue issues. Scenes were also expanded, rewritten, or had their continuity corrected, with minor retcons also made. Over 94,000 words in length it reads better—more smoothly—than the original draft. Short of going through it line by line, there’s very little I can do with it. As it stands, it’s in a much better place.
 
Chronicles of Ardis: Reckonings
Finished back in 2018, Reckonings had the fortunate chance of being edited by a non-professional editor and then further cleaned up by Grammarly. Over 81,000 words, it was a fun story to write. While I admit I’d like to add more, Reckonings tells what needs to be told without the need to add anything else.   
 
Chronicles of Ardis: Convergence
Finished back in June of 2019, Convergence was initially 18 Chapters. However, being over 88,000 words, I wasn’t satisfied with having packed so much information in the last 6 or so chapters and transformed it into 21 Chapters for better reading.
 
Chronicles of Ardis: Threshold
Finished on September 27, 2022, Threshold was 101,422 words long and has since crawled up to 101,741 words. Originally subtitled Dark Winter, which was a play on words using themes found throughout the book, it felt insufficient. Then again, it may fit. I find myself wanting to reexamine a few spots and have Beta Readers going through it; things could get edited when the time comes.


If all goes to plan, I should be officially submitting by December 31st, 2022, or depending on the feedback I receive, sometime in January.  I also plan on adding slightly updated maps, stellar system data, and other figures, possibly in the coming days or weeks. 

Thursday, June 24, 2021

What’s in a Name: The Subtitle of Book I

“Is this a religious book?”
“Uh… no, why?”
“Well, your subtitle seems to suggest it.”
“I don’t write theology, I write science fantasy. I believe you need to avail yourself of a dictionary.”
 
As I was nearing completion of the first draft of Book I back in 2015, I began mulling over an appropriate title. Originally, I was considering something whimsical, such as ‘The Saga of Ardis,’ when an idea struck me to turn one book into multiple. With this in mind, ‘Chronicles of Ardis,’ felt like a working main title, leaving me in search of a catchy subtitle. After a few weeks, one word started to hit just write, a word which felt almost like a bane.
 
If you recognize the word ‘concordance,’ then you might know it to be synonymous with a ‘Biblical Concordance’ (of which I do own.) Which by definition is ‘an alphabetical list of the words (especially the important ones) present in a text, usually with citations of the passages in which they are found. However, this isn’t the only way that the word is used. With a modest bit of research (and search on Wikipedia,) you also find a bilingual concordance which is simply ‘a concordance based on aligned parallel text.’ Scrolling down a little, you also find that concordances are frequently used in linguistics when studying a text.
 
Wikipedia aside, there’s also the definition of the word, taken from the online Miriam-Webster Dictionary:
 
Concordance (noun)
 
1: an alphabetical index of the principal words in a book or the works of an author with their immediate contexts
 
2: CONCORD, AGREEMENT (Note: both words have definitions as well.)

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A simple Google search will also show:

noun: concordance; plural noun: concordances
 
1: an alphabetical list of the words (especially the important ones) present in a text, usually with citations of the passages in which they are found.
"a concordance to the Bible"
a generated list of instances in which a particular word occurs in a digital corpus, typically with the context also provided.
"clicking on any word in the source text produces a concordance"
 
2: FORMAL
agreement or consistency.
"the concordance between the teams' research results"
 
3: MEDICINE
the inheritance by two related individuals (especially twins) of the same genetic characteristic, such as susceptibility to disease.
 
Origin: Late Middle English: from Old French, from medieval Latin concordantia, from concordant- ‘being of one mind’
 
I think it’s safe to assume that I went for the second option found in either of these definitions. Nevertheless, it has brought a degree of wry amusement over the years. For instance, at one point, if you were to go to Amazon and put into the search box “Chronicles of Ardis: Concordance,” not only would it not come up, but it would bring up a search of over 700 books not even remotely related to my own, but said books were theological. I suspected the reason behind this was the subtitle.   
 
Lastly, I’ve heard more than one person ask a variation of the question written back at the beginning. Funnier still are the people that argued with me about the use of the word, as though it was locked into one thing alone. While that might be initially understandable, considering how it’s mostly used, it should come as no surprise that this word by itself had more than one meaning and can be used in other contexts. As for my own use of it, it stems from the idea that those gathered had ‘reached an accord being of mind in their thoughts and deeds.’ I had considered other words, such as harmony, accord, and the like. However, they failed to grab my attention as the word concordance did.